Old Tree
By: Kimberly Villlalta
As old as I am I still get news paper stecked on me
no matter what
if I drop tears
it turns out to be all over new york
its red green and some yellow gold color
in winter I am naked and can’t get warm
I get water
I get snowed on
I am old so people cut me down and I died.
Thursday, March 11, 2010
Friday, March 5, 2010
This type love By: Shihan
The poems that we so far read is This type love By:Shihan
Its the best poem we read will to me it is.I like it because it talkes about diffent types of loves.A other reson that i like this poem is because its nice becuase he is saying what type of love he wants and needes.But like i dont get the end a little because he is looking 4 some one that is like how he is saying it in the poem but he is all ready with some one and he said he is going to share that love with the girl he is married with.That is the part i dont get . The quote that i think is that best is "I want a love that's as unexplainable as she is but I'm married, so she's going to be the one i share this love with." That is the hottest quote in the poem will that is my thought i dont know about others. That is why i like that poem.
Its the best poem we read will to me it is.I like it because it talkes about diffent types of loves.A other reson that i like this poem is because its nice becuase he is saying what type of love he wants and needes.But like i dont get the end a little because he is looking 4 some one that is like how he is saying it in the poem but he is all ready with some one and he said he is going to share that love with the girl he is married with.That is the part i dont get . The quote that i think is that best is "I want a love that's as unexplainable as she is but I'm married, so she's going to be the one i share this love with." That is the hottest quote in the poem will that is my thought i dont know about others. That is why i like that poem.
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